About Marvelous Industries:
Our business specializes in the more obtuse constructs of the gaming world. All of the strange and unrealistic concepts that intrigue the inquisitive can be found here! Our goal more or less is to make games that are challenging as much as they are confusing in order to make the gamer work harder to be the very best that no one ever was.
We at Marvelous Industries know that gamers are limited to the genres of games that they can choose from in today's market. We provide our gamers with with a unique style of gameplay that will have them craving for more. By going out of the box and turning reality into fantasy we are able to construct any and all concepts our loyal fans can come up with. Let's say you want to be Harambe, and battle king kong, we will make it happen.
The basic concept is if you want to be a sloth soaring across the skies from realm to realm, planet to planet, solar system to galaxy, we will make a game in which you do just that; we'll even give you a cape! In all seriousness we aim to serve our clients to the very best of our abilities. While keeping everything light-hearted and fun, we do wish to reach out to as many gamers as possible.
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Very good vocabulary usage. "While" in the last sentence needs to be capitalized. Also, example usage was part of the rubric, and there isn't a single example in here (that I see).
ReplyDeleteThe layout and grammar is very good, and the video you posted in here was awesome for graphics. You're "home" tab and "about us" tab you can't read because it's white on white. The colors really go together with the theme of your business, good job.
About Marvelous Industries subtitle is redundant and unnecessary. Overuse the word 'that' and couple missing commas. Otherwise, wildly clever and intriguing.
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